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The Poddington Project: Christine DeWinter

Grief Upon the Slossipath

The sun it beat upon the brow
Of every farmer at his plow
Walking the fields row by row
Along the steadfast Slossipath

Then Aldora and her Bevan
Lovers two, 'cross fields they ran
To the churchyard, with their banns
To post beside the Slossipath.

Beneath the sun, she stopped to rest
And catch her breath at his bequest
'My Bevan, of all, you are best'
She said beside the Slossipath.

'Then let us to the stones of Gade
Go' said he, 'for in their shade
Sprites will bless a tryst if made
Looking down on Slossipath.'

Blushing maiden, she believed
Soon 'neath the stones, her bosom heaved,
With the spell her lover weaved
About the mystic Slossipath.

When she awoke, the sun had fled
And in the sand, a note she read
By light of moon, 'Goodbye' it said
'I flow away like Slossipath.

So Aldora, through fields of grain
Golden, like a lion's mane
Drifted, weeping for her pain
Begun so near the Slossipath.

Soon all her shame, the people knew
As deep within, the offspring grew
What could have been a love so true
Betrayed beside the Slossipath.

In spring, a baby boy was born
To Aldora, the maid forlorn
Born without breath, and none did mourn
The piteous spawn near Slossipath.

Up to the stones, she took her son
With countenance like his father's one
And buried him beneath the dun
Along the banks of Slossipath.

Then as she sat beside the stream
Wishing for what might have been
Had not her Bevan become mean
And run away like Slossipath

Her teardrops fell and touched the earth
Atop the mound, her child's berth
A whispered voice spoke "What is worth
Some vengeance along the Slossipath?

'Good Sir' said she, without a start
'I have no vengeance in my heart
I only wish to be apart
From all the pain of Slossipath.'

'What of the cur who caused your grief?
Aldora, do you want relief
And justice for your virtue's thief
The yellow rogue of Slossipath'

'His child is dead, and here he lay
There is no greater price to pay
What started here, shall now here stay
Along the steadfast Slossipath.

Her virtue tested, shewed forth gold
The stranger said 'I will be bold
A gift I give, a rhyme when told
Removes the grief of Slossipath.'

'But first, if you would be so kind
What name was giv'n the child sublime
Who rests now under spurge and thyme
Beside the restful Slossipath.'

'I call him Flynn, he is the son
Of Bevan, my redheaded one
Though christened not, he died too young
A lost child by the Slossipath.

'My thanks' said he, 'now listen quick
To leave this pain, you must go lick
The stones of Gade, and hold a stick
Dipped in the waves of Slossipath.

Then break the stick, and speak these words
To the sky and to the birds
'I seek the door that was offered
And leave the pain of Slossipath'"

She dried her eyes without a sound
And placed a kiss upon the ground
For Flynn, who slept beneath the mound
Beside the quiet Slossipath.

Then to the task, she put her mind,
The oaken stick and stones to find
Then with a wave, broke ties that bind
Her heart to lands near Slossipath.

Her homage to the stones she paid
Then as she spoke, the Door of Gade
Opened in that stony glade
That looked down onto Slossipath.

Within the doorway Bevan stood
His tear-stained face behind his hood
'I was brought here before I could
Explain beside the Slossipath.

(Editor's note: Two versions of this poem exist--the original draft,
and that which was published in Lady's Purview, most likely at the
insistence of its editor, Frances LeVecque. The published ending
is reproduced below, while the original manuscript ending follows.)

She instantly to his arms ran
Forgiving in a kiss, the man
Who left to rule the Faerie Land
Beyond the river Slossipath

'My love' she cried, 'we had a son
Who died before his life begun.
For him, my tears will always run
A volume like the Slossipath'

He held her close, then command gave
To winged ones, who to the grave
Of little Flynn flew like the ravens
That gather by the Slossipath.

And with their bare hands,faeries toiled
To free the coffin from the soil
And take the child, in swaddlings coiled
Out of the land of Slossipath.

Bevan the King of Faerie Land
Took his dead child in his hands
'You come from here, you could not stand
To live beside the Slossipath'

He with tender hands unwound
The swaddling rags, then took his crown
On the child's brow, he placed it 'round
Dead prince, beyond the Slossipath.

They turned their backs upon the door
'Pray, rule with me, forevermore
E'en though I cut you to the core
In leaving you by Slossipath.'

And as the door closed on the sight
Of riverbank and landscape blight
A tiny sound came from the mite
The once dead son of Slossipath.

Then Aldora, and Bevan knew
Queen and King, and parents too
Their son revived, the words were true
He could not live near Slossipath.

Thus Flynn became the eldest one
Of six daughters and six sons
Born out of love, forgiveness won
Beyond the shores of Slossipath.

So we remember bloods don't mix
Between the worlds, without some tricks
And all-forgiving love, and sticks
Dipped in the Slossipath.

But not for fickle whim do we
Open doors we cannot see
Unless we first bear misery
Beside the flowing Slossipath.

(Editor's note: Here follows the original manuscript ending. Our thanks
to the DeWinter family for their cooperation in its recovery.)

Aldora wept to see him now
A faerie crown upon his brow
She froze as she remembered how
He took her by the Slossipath.

He begged 'I loved you 'neath the grain
Come be my queen and help me reign
In this realm, you will ne'er be stained
By memories of the Slossipath'

She calmly spake, 'I'll think no more
Of your offer, for by lore
Good Christians cannot pass the door
To your realm from the Slossipath

And then she swiftly took a blade
Between her breasts, a deep stab made
And joined her dead son, in that glade
Of stones beside the Slossipath.

Good children, then, we should beware
Not look for lovers from afar
For cruel fate our lives may mar
Like Aldora of Slossipath.

(Robyn Peters)